When you walk in my room you will see a white door and when you walk in the main area all the walls are white with dark furniture. The reason why it is so special to me is that my mothers friend gave it to me from Australia. You have some great ideas and I can get a really good visualisation of your room. In the left corner when you walk in is a stack of books, a few being written in swedish. I also have my Xbox which is of the things I play when Im not doing anything. You might say that your home is a workplace or an office if you or your parents seem to always be working from home. I have modern tropical theme with orange and blue striped sheets with a blue duva. For the decorations there is a row of vintage paper dresses hanging above my bed, a picture of Paris- (somewhere I would like to go), A big round mirror, just high enough for me to use, and an inspirational sayings that inspire me each day. Overall well done. Roman blinds with large, bold coloured birds of many forms. I have a single bed in the opposite corner of my room. You could visualize your whole room.The furniture paragraph is very good. Use used I little bit of complex vocabulary but not a lot. By William Wightman 8WH. the spelling was great and I really enjoyed reading the of writing you worked on. My room is VERY messy. It might not seem like your average 13 year old bedroom because really this bedroom wasn't even for me, it was meant to be a spare room. I love the way in which you used senses, This is great. Good job colt. Hopefully we will get you some colour in your room soon. As I creep through the messiness there begins a pile of lego pieces on the grey dull carpet waiting for someone to stand on it and be be pricked. Layout in my room is great I really like it. squishy, soft, lumps and bumps. They dont like the feeling every day of having to entertain themselves at home! The colors of my room are dark and a little bit of white. My room feels very charismatic and lively, as though a lot is happening in a single space. I dont like having my room messy but no-one wants to clean their room right? Reading and studying books across the studying bench and on the side table. Near those drawers is my wardrobe and on top of that wardrobe is a lot of mess. I liked how you took the audience on a trip around your room. My theme, my theme of my room is based on a sporty kind of theme. So over all the 4 main things that i love about my room are style , layout ,accessories and furniture. You may see now why its so untouched. There is a leather chest that I dump all my clothes on, and a bunch of tools and motorbike gear in the gray shelving unit. Maybe next time try to write more in some paragraphs, and tell us about more things. You have described it so accurately. Christina Moses Weight Loss, Pagkakaiba ng pagsulat ng ulat at sulating pananaliksik? It is facing the East, which means that in the morning you can see the sunrise from my window. I spotted a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. Very good description i could imagine i'm there.Very good punctuation. In my room we have really ugly wall paper, it is green and white, but ugly green. My bedroom is in the middle of two other bedrooms. The layout of my bedroom is the thing I most like about my room. In my room I have a new wooden drawers and white shelves beside. I like this description of your bed room. Two clocks that are big and annoying, a computer that is big and fun and lamp that is bright, speakers that are loud and white curtains white and a mirror that is big. I have a blue stegosaurus lampshade, a monitor and PS4, a TV and even a bulletin board. It's very clean and healthy room,well it wouldnt be clean without my mother, of course, sometimes you just need her to boss you around. Finally, the coldness, if its snowing that cup of water is frozen almost solid, I had to use three blankets those mourning, it gets really chilly. I can imagine what your room would be like. My room has a modern style to it because of the things I have in it. If you said your home was a warzone, you might think it wasnt a particularly nice place to be. There is a big space in the middle of the room because of the positioning of the furniture. People who love the outdoors might feel most at ease and happy when theyre outside in the forest. I noticed that one word keep coming up wrong, it was colour. Cleanliness, my room is not what you call clean my clothes from school lying on my bed jerseys not been hung up because I'm to lazy, my bed all messed up because I never make it, but some things aren't all bad like the way I have set up stuff that makes it look really cool and neat. There are three brass coloured wall lamps scattered around the room that have been pulled out their sockets and painted under, there are small clusters of hooks and hangers ready for decoration like a wonderful poster and a few of my creations from school. Next time you can probably calm down by using the brackets. so I was a bit confused. Well done!!! I would give you a rubric 5. The colours in your room must be very bright with the sun on it and I can visualise your room. With its concrete floor and the temporary plywood walls. Chris Trousdale Cause Of Death, Don't even get me started on my desk it's hardly a desk anymore it's just for storage.anything my mum tells me to pick up off the floor I most of the time just chuck it to the top of my desk or in the three sequenced in size draws that I can no longer hardly open because there full of unneeded nonsense already. Secondly the lighting, at four oclock my room is almost pitch black and its so damp and cold. Now, were talking about the place of work starting to feel like youre home because youre there so much. I like my room the way it is because I love the view and how it is laid out. Another person who might call their home a prison could be someone who feels like theyre sick of being at home on vacation and wants to go back to school. Then there's my desk covered in books, pens and rubbish along with my PJs and sports gear spread everywhere . It may be the second smallest room in the house but Im proud to call it mine.This style of bedroom works well for me and fits me perfectly. I have two windows in my room one facing straight ahead of you as you walk in and the other one above the bed. I have a table in my room strewn with fly tying equipment and materials, it shows that I like fishing. Next time just maybe double check spelling. If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! I try make my room a beach theme because I love going to the beach. There is normally a lot of clothes spewing out of the the draws and onto the floor, it sortof looks like a waterfall if you are really imagine it, I find it frustrating when my Mum cleans it up because it is just going to get messy again. I LOVE THE DETAILED DESCRIPTION OF THE THINGS YOU CAN SEE OUT YOUR WINDOW. I also have two Japanese swords in my room and one of them are a full size katana and makes my room feel like i'm safe if anyone tries to break in. The simplest way to make a metaphor is to use this pattern: First noun + to be verb + a/an + second noun She is an angel. The other side of the room has my single bed crammed in the corner by the door. The untidiness of my bed is also horrific, just a pile of blankets, sheets and a duvet all scrunched up in the middle of the bed. No one's room is black and white they all have colours and mine has definitely got a lot of colours. Sometimes the temperature goes up and sometimes goes right down. I really enjoy your description jake I can visualize your bedroom very well. Like I do my homework on my desk. Luckily for me I dont have much to tidy, unlike my brother. I think your room is very descriptive James, I think you did a good job on this description. Youd need to think of something your home reminds you of: a zoo, a swamp, a castle, or a zen retreat. Im a bit compulsive, whereas is Sam is often tired or moody, so the room not only has the consistency of Two-Face in cleanliness, but will also resemble him; one half dark, messy and overall ugly, one half clean, clear and less ugly. There is the washing machine and all the dirty clothes from the laundry in my room because our new house is very small. It is a square shape with a little rectangle that leads to the door. Islas Bedroom Description You might say this if you felt like you learned a lot during your summer break from school. There are green curtains in my room that catch your eyes. The first one is of peppers that I painted at Lauriston in year 4, that was the one that got ripped off the wall. The only way my room is brightened up is by having furniture with colour. It has the swirls because it gives the texture a bit more kick when you look at it and because my gran & Gran dad liked it that way. Her eyes were diamonds. The layout of my room is your everyday large square room allowing a big area to dot items around, such as a bright white, built in wardrobe, a comforting king single or the small baby blue couch. I didn't see any spelling mistakes. Brown that stands out because of the shine. Your lucky that it's big haha 4. My pillow is softer than a cloud and feels like a giant marshmallow. My carpet, I like my carpet Dont get me wrong I like the light creamy color that gets me comfy, I like the nice pillow feeling of it and how it eases me to sleep really quickly. I have separated the metaphors on this page into two lists. I hope you can imagine my very much loved bedroom in your mind as if you're there at my house. Next time read through it and really think about what word could fit in there that will work even better. The color of my carpet is a creamy grey that somehow makes me feel more comfortable than ever. Even though my drawers, desk, bedside table, curtains and walls are all white. On the top end there is two pillows and a bundle of pijamas. They will use and expand upon it again and again within creative writing and narrative writing topics, and there are so many ways to get those creative juices flowing. The relaxation of leaping onto it at the end of the day is basically the same as reading a extremely tired baby a lullaby. Above my bed are decorations and then across from my bed there is my creamy white set of draws. A cool breeze drifts in from an open door or window. I love my room because it's mine. It's a very accurate description and well written but the mess is very understated! The drawers hold all my hair ties, my sunglasses and headphones and stationary. You were very descriptive when it came to what you liked about your room and what you didn't like. My most favorite piece of furniture in my room is most definitely my bed because its where I spend most of my time and when you spend time with something like that for that long you're sure to end up getting attached to it, but anyway my bed is my favorite thing in my room because its warm when I want warm and cool when I want cool and plus its majorly comfy. My colors, I like the choice of colors that are in my bedroom. It is a large room that comes out of the side but barely gets any sunlight and heat. When I get up in the morning to go to school, or after a big sleep-in, my toes touch the soft dark carpet. Use adjectives. Sometimes when it's really cold i'll have my soft red blanket as well. I don't think you've left out a single thing about your room :), This sounds like the room I have been in there is lots of detail.The ending paragraph is great to end the description, This sounds very descriptive. Next to that is a deceptive worktop. I have small colorful dots (pink,green,yellow,blue), turquoise blue love hearts and my name stuck to my shiny white wardrobe. You describe it very well, you could visualize yourself in your room. My bedside table is black with sticker brands covering them. I think you needed to proof red over it because there is a fair amount of grammar mistakes but otherwise good. Your writing was amazing and I didn't find any spelling mistakes. The best bit is that I didnt even pick it.My bedroom sits at the front of the house looking over the road and into the sun. Very descriptive though - well done! The cleanliness of my bedroom is pretty good, but sometimes my football gear is left outside my wardrobe on the floor. If you open the window the fresh air wafts in. Personally would like a orange feature wall in my bedroom but when you're renting a house you have to have permission to do so. I work my way through the chaos and reach my bed. The walls of my room are not too interesting at the moment, as they are covered in a bright white wall paper sealer ready for my new paint colours of white and teal blue. Most times I just laugh because sometimes he is just plain old stupid. Now to the TV, it's too big! Except for the Furniture paragraph. My mini drawers has three drawers on top of each other with the middle one being slightly longer than the others. I have heaps of ski gear but I dont really have anywhere to put it so even if I do clean my room, my ski gear normally stays on the floor. My books are bright and colourful so they stand out, all of them are different colours. We have a old square tv holder thingy that I used to swing on until I put a hole in the wall, its still there. My bedroom is the room straight ahead of the hallway it has the great things that most bedrooms have a theme, colors, bed and a carpet and those are the four topics I will tell you about. It has a stuffed toy pit on the other side of the room as you walk in and it has a shelf above it with more toys, piggy banks, my xbox that doesn't work, my books and other stuff. Out my window you can see a stand of poplars, some five finger leaf trees and a beige orange rhododendron (type of flower). A few things to fix up but over all it was good. I have recently changed around my room. In my room there can sometimes be a lot of space when my room is clean but when it is untidy there is literally not space because of the stuff on the floor. This is the exact opposite of the earlier metaphor saying that your home is a workplace. Ruebens bedroom Personally I love my Out my east facing window you can see the black and white calves frolicking through the lush green grass in the paddock and the different coloured cars zooming down Thompsons Track. Mine is to the right of the door and facing it, whereas Sams is directly in front of the door facing towards it too. The best part about having a themed bedroom is that it makes me more relaxed when I come home from a long day at school. But with all that there are some amazing bonuses like awesome modern day accessories and how amazingly clean it is! The fresh air circulates the room which gives me a sense of new and relaxation. September 2016 With the blankets layered on top of me that are all different colours. your story of your bed room is really good i like your volcabarere in it i really liked your story next time you could work on double check your work for spelling errors well done, I really like this Connor! Other than that good job. 2. Not quite how I see your room - it is a typical boys bedroom with a LOT of mess on the floor and you also forgot to say that you chuck stuff under your bed as well as the "random drawers"! The best part of my room is the furniture and layout. Next time you could have more ideas because the paragraphs were a little short. Opposite the set of drawers is my build in wardrobe with my blue and red triangle patterned shelves.Also right in front of you as you walk in there is my big white window which is the main source of light. I love the colour scheme in my bedroom as turquoise blue is one of favourite colours. Overall I love my room to pieces because it belongs to me. It describes your room well. My room also has a bit of a natural vibe as there are a far few plants around room. 3, Great description Hayden, you forgot to mention the constant piles of washing in it! These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. The description of the desk and wardrobe are spot on!! My wardrobe is unbelievably messy because theres so much stuff I have to fit in it, because my room is small compared to all the other rooms. My room doesnt smell that good. The space of my room is quite small, but if you take out my draws it's a massive space. I, myself, like my room a lot, its not perfect but its very me and its filled with things I love like sport and photography. My bedroom is the second largest bedroom in my house, and in this description writing I will describe to you about my bedroom by my accessories, layout/space, color and furniture so here we go. Accessories, accessories are big in my room because I picked them personally and they were given to me as gifts but they are apart of my favorite things. Only to sleep and occasionally use for Gaming, because my room is positioned at the end of the house, opposite to the end that the T.V is. 3+. In my personal opinion I do love the way my bedroom looks and how it has a theme and a great view! This was well edited, but to get even better look over and over. Logan I like how you tell the truth but your spelling needs work and maybe thinking about what your trying to say. My animal sketches hanging on my wall and blowing in a winter breeze were only done in black and white. The view of my room is amazing because when I look out of my window I see my whole farm I can see our cows I can see our cowshed and the sun rise. My bedroom is a very new addition to the world, like how its layout is not even final and having barely any furniture. My room has lots of colour in it. By my creamy white door there is a place where I hang up all my achievements such as medals, certificates and much more over top of that there is a glow in the dark poster I find that really youneek because it looks really cool when it's night. November 2016 There is a big black shoebox beside my bed which fits all my shoes in it. This is to say that one person (your mother, father, wife, husband) is the person who makes you feel most comfortable and relaxed. Poor thing, your hands are as cold as ice! They might also have filing cabinets and stacks of work-related folders lying around. From my green reading lamp to my dart board, my patterned roman blinds and funky hooks on the wall. I have a black carpet with a white lines diagonally going through it. It also has jumps for my motorbike but you cant really see them because they are covered over with grass since I dont go on them much anymore. Last updated: April 25 2022. The sun shines in my room which makes my room warm up. In the summer it reaches a boiling point the duvets on the bed gets thinner and thinner and it gets harder to catch some sleep. But you a lot of descriptive words. It's good that he loves his room and his own space. The crossword clue possible answer is available in 3 letters. 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